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Fifth-grader Trista wrote this poem to give her readers an important message.

Did You Ever Look at . . .

Did you ever look at the stars in the sky?
What did you see?
I saw the Big Dipper, the Little Dipper.
I look very closely and see the shape of my face.

Did you ever look at the sky on an afternoon?
What did you see?
I saw children in a train and a very big castle.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you may see
your beautiful face.

Did you ever look in the mirror?
What did you see?
I saw my beautiful skin, blond hair, and hazel eyes.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you will
know that you are truly beautiful, too!